Wonderful poem but some lines like" his deepest sigh was her expire" and "beating lonely out of sync" are beyond me. Other lines have been superbly written.
Your poetry is sad and touching,sometimes premonition of death of your dear one haunts you ,fear is the element that rules.Being a poet stark vulgarity of world is inadvertently exposed,however,the crust is also that world that hath spellbound generations of poets-live and let live till life exists.
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