I just love to read and write poems of love , this was good, but I enjoy poems that ryme to that special person that you write about what do you think. please check out some of my poems. I will have new poems pretty shortly. Write on
ok, what a good story you have here my friend, have you ever thought about the journey to your mind does, your mind can close or open and then spills out your inner thought that makes the story great!!! thanks for sharing this, I love it.
very good story, in my opinion you should continue adding chapters and evently into a book, it catches the eye. Good writng, write on and keep up the good work
A great story that you wrote kere. I like all of your lines but these lines you wrote strikes me great my gear.
As a result, it takes time for a broken heart to heal
For I know my GOD will handle the rest
The LORD always loves us no matter what, he will never let us down, just keep writing and fill me with your good poems, ok.
Terry B
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