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Review by JacoLouwKunste
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
good story =] really coooool!! but i think,.. only my opinion...MINE... change the first paragraph a bit... make it more catchy, something that will hold people like sticky paper! i was a little bit lost on the first paragraph... but go on with it =D... write write and WRITE =D
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Review of Your Today  
Review by JacoLouwKunste
Rated: E | (3.5)
i like it... i like the flow in it... it isnt top notch yet... can use a little touch up and a re read! but keep on doing wht u do man... wish i could write that well for the matter of fact! if you would like to share work, email me at wolgod@yahoo.com!
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Review of In Dreams  
Review by JacoLouwKunste
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
amazing... all i can say is amazing! couldnt catch at first what was going on, but damn dude! this is some powerfull words u skoe there! the way u write, the way the words relate with each other... damn man i loved this piece! would like to read more of your work... would u like to email me one time? wolgod@yahoo.com
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