It is a very, very interesting piece of writing. My family dated way back on both my parents' sides, and they have common names, at least one like an uncle, aunt, and other relatives. I could readily visualize the characters in your story. Excellent!
You certainly write well. Music is the heartbeat of a people ...you are very accomplished. You sing + you play instruments. That is great!
Thanks for sharing your life story. Awesome!
This is a very moving story. It captured my attention so much ...The old Lady was so kind ...her goodwill/kindness helped her willpower to get better and also helped the man and his family to show appreciation for the good deed.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.
Your poem is liken to a building that is built to precision. It was made to fit the rules. It's awesome, I liked it very much. The words seemed to be carefully chosen hence painted a picture of clarity. Thumbs up!
I liked the rhythm and the word-power. Poetry is really and truly one of the greatest tools available to create the impression of the expression of speech, the written word and sound.
An awesome piece. This is what the gist of good poetry should be. I do agree wholeheartedly with the stanza "
As nature abhors a vacuum.
So the world abhors aloneness." ...Even though there may not be physical presence of people among certain person/persons it's hard for one to be completely lonely in this 8-billion world and a world crammed with social media.
If you don't write anymore you can recite. Much blessings.
A well put together article. The article captures the reader's attention and lends itself to further reading. I do like the writing style so I would encourage you to continue writing.
Thumbs up!!!
Such a wonderful story. Awesome writing; I had to read from start to finish as the intensity captured my interest. I would have preferred that Jacob and the Ice-maid survive so as to give continuity to the story or just merely a Part II.
Thanks for sharing though. I enjoyed it.
Good topic, the writer did well, well-thinking points, worth reading. Thanks for sharing.
(note: Every prose can be edited; there is no writing that is foolproof.)
This is a wonderful piece of writing. I enjoyed reading it so much that I had to share it with my followers on Facebook and twitter. Wow! I would like to rewire a few heads too. Not Trump's nor Jeb's nor Hillary's but a few hard headed people. Thumbs up!
Great poetry, the stanzas are all spicy; I locked onto the stanzas as to say my life depends on them. I couldn't stop reading until the end.
That's excellent material, I can see that a book is in the making ...
Thumbs up!!!
There may be good reason(s) for a war but war is against the nature of man. I like the way you use the stakeholders, such an edifying poem. Good job!!!
Marvelous! Well written...introspect - rather sad. Impression- will lead many readers to reflection. Interpretation/ illustration - Great poem, you distill your vast knowledge into a kind of panoramic view of competitiveness. Thumbs up!!!
Frankly, I was locked on to the stanzas as if my life depended on them. Thanks for sharing.
Awesome! I was captured with suspense . I really liked the story but I would prefer an ending where the Dragon tried to catch the boy and grandpa but couldn't as it was young and couldn't move as fast. Good though.
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