Very good piece! I read it trying to figure out what it could be...lol I guess that is one way you can stop an epidemic. I am not a professional critique but I loved the word play and how you pieced everything together so strategically. Since we are all writers please fill free to leave a couple reviews of your own.
Keep up the good work, love to see more from you.
THIS IS A VERY GOOD STORY TURNED INTO POETRY. I WOULD LIKE TO SAY THANK YOU FOR HAVING THE COURAGE TO WRITE SUCH A PIECE. GOOD LUCK IN THE FUTURE WITH YOUR WRITING.
THIS IS THE FIRST AND MAYBE THE LAST POEM I GIVE A PERFECT RATING. I JUST LOVED THE CREATIVE WORDPLAY INVOLVED SO MUCH I HAD TO DO IT. PLEASE KEEP WRITING
SO THAT I CAN KEEP READING.
I really like the raw honesty of this poem. The emotion you display with your words is very creative. I hope to read more from you and you from me in the future.
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