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Rated: E | (3.5)
Heartbreak and regret. forbidden love and betrayal. this seems to have a lonely and heartbroken appeal to it. in my honest opinion, i ache for the author but the flow was not consistent and the composure was lackluster. You had my attention at the beginning but i began to drift and re-read towards the end.
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