Wow i really liked this first off because i love the running bear song :) secondly because i can relate to the poor girl as i have been coaxed into doing things by my brothers when i was scared (once resulting in getting my nose broken!) but thirdly its just so well written and i strive to be able to write like this one day it gives such a vivid image of the scene and i really got pulled into the story :)
A wonderful read :)
I really like this one too. such a wonderful message to just care about people and not expect anything in return. but very well written and it made me smile!
I Loved this! its so clever and well written! the beautiful description makes me want to catch the same train when i go to Scotland! and i laughed out loud at your last remark which i do hope you mother gave you a good box around the ears for! :)
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