that was a very good read. it puts me in a bind of Stephen King's work. I like the proficient use of character dialogue to describe almost everything early in the story. and what happened to the bodies in the flashlightand we never know if the cause of the events or Supernatural or the results of some psychopath hiding out in that Park. I usually like to offer some constructive criticism but I am not able to think of anything I would change at this time
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