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Review by T.O. Schalkx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Personally, I really, really liked it. There were a few times when I felt improvement could be given to the story-telling: But for the most part I felt I was reading a very refined, professionally written piece. I very much liked the sing-song taunt you left at the end of the story, which added a very creepy after note, and I found much of it grippingly realistic. I look forward to reading more from you, and would be very much obliged if you would be able to send some feedback my way. You have earned your self a fan with this simple piece.
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