I liked the words you used in the first stanza, its brought out the care to detail in the poem and allows of the reader to have a better sense of imagery.
Great topic and idea, especially with the "we are FDA" part. Although there are some parts were the flow is broken for a short while, but in general it's a good poem , one that speaks the truth.
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