A-hahahha, I love the first part. all throughout history people write or draw what they cannot say out loud. and maybe being a dog would be nice for a change. Keep writing!
woah, that's a lotta bleeding, bombing, crying, scary stuff all in one. I kinda get the sense your maybe a little angry. But overall pretty good a little hard to tell who's lying what or maybe that's the point.
I love the whole flow of this poem, the rhymes makes sense and they are quite fun the read. a very thought provoking poem, where did the cows go? did we do this to the cow? should be taking more care of our farm animals?
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