WOW another well written piece.
Although it made me cry I loved it. I know only two well what it is like to put my partner before my self and not get any recognition for it.
I hope that some day I am able to write as well as you do.
Keep it up Love to read more.
Sue K
Wow That was wonderful. Although it reminds me how much i wish i was close to my family.
It is nice to know that family bonds do exist.
You have a real knack for putting your feelings in to words.
I hope to see more of your work.
Have a wonderful day
Sue K
That is sweat. As I was reading it I envisioned it on a wall hanging with a pitcher with a rainbow in it as background. I believe it is truly something when that happens. You really should try and get some one to use it in that manner. I know If I saw that poem on a nice wall hanging I would by it. Keep up the good work.
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