Whee! I likes it! I felt rather sorry for Stacy at the end, she didn't have anything to live for, and she might be all alone at this point. You could really feel for her because of everything happening around her. The love triangle was well done, and I was left feeling a desire for everyone to be happy. Sorry, I can't think of anything to critique, maybe because I was caught into it right away and didn't want to stop reading long enough to notice mistakes. Good luck in the contest!
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