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Review of The Dream  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is the best work I've read on WDC to date. It has every dramatic element that makes a reader say wow! and come back for more.

My only criticism is that the metaphors seemed to be too noticeable; maybe a bit forced and not seemless or in the flow.
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