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Review by Stevie Holliday Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Loved the concept and plot of this story! I liked how the formula not only caused weight gain, but also caused everyone to enjoy their gain, too. Also loved the plot twist when the two guys forgot to take their pills. However, I wish there had been more physical description of each of the characters besides just their weight and body proportions. I hope you continue to write and I look forward to more fun WG fiction from you!
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