Amazing story! It was a great and interesting read the whole way through. I really like how you captured the emotions of the characters, but more importantly the whole plot of the story itself. It kept me entertained and I if there were any, I didn't see any typo's at all.
On a side note, it's freaky how I can actually see this happening one day. All of it, even down to the implants and virus. I am a believer in the fact that technology has and is going too far. I can see it, even just in the way our trees are dying.
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