I have to admit I almost quit part way through. I guess I'm not as patient as I once was. It felt was a little slow but as I finished it that felling dissipated and that is important. You pulled me back when I was about to leave.
What I liked about the piece was its charm, a truly artistic quality. I would like to read more.
What can I say but I like the story and love the delevery and with the little time I have this is one of the few places I will go until the movie comes out.
This is the kind of writing that forces you mind into video. You can actually see and feel the characters, and smell Goat.
Thank you Sara.
I only had time to read the first day. I like the characters they were interesting. The story moved and held interest. I instantly pictured a graphic of "String Boy". I'm affraid I have nothing unpleasant to say about, I liked it.
Thanks,
Greg
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