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I had eye of a tiger memes happening badly, and honestly saw the strive forward feelings conveyed in the well edited prose. It's very hard to be positive when things happen beyond our control that seem so harsh, and unwarranted. That struggle is a very human thing. Thank you for sharing and take care.
Good Day Words Whirling 'Round Random Review and gosh! delightful story in a prose form to share the day your got Charlie, why, and the feelings. well done and I really enjoyed as I have my own boy, Milo. Kind soul, getting from a shelter, and honestly expressed. Thanks and again enjoy you day.
I always enjoy these small poem forms that spot on express some wonderful imagery without saying a lot. With winter in our headlights this is so pleasant. Thank you, and great editing, I see no errors.
If this is true, how creepy, I've really seen too many horror movies. Must have been some impact to write later about it. Well told, not a lot of imagery but my mind added some. I too am wondering about the missing fingers. Thank for sharing, and perhaps a little creepy, I enjoyed it! Thanks!
A metaphoric way to describe a dragonfly. Well done. describing as a spiritual experience was a neat touch, and I could get on board of the mystic feelings you were dropping. Well edited and small and enjoyable, Thanks!
Favorite spot,
Gifts which can come only
from this iridescent beauty.
dark, expressive look at technology and how its used. Some big words that aren't common, and erie imagery throughout. It's well done and I see no errors, thanks and enjoy your day. Enjoyable in it grim outlook.
Very suggestive, and quaint. A romantic poem, tells true if romance is one's thing, I myself am not. The thoughts and passion of a special night, the feelings, the rush, it all laid bare in this small, well edited prose, even fancy word usage, "proclivities".
Thank you for sharing, off I go back into my happy dark places. staiNed
Romantic and full of love without being too fluffy. It's great to see feelings for her quirky ways as stated. I see no errors and suggestion only presentation more as a poem, not prose. Thanks! and enjoy your day.
You nailed the form, and it lokks neat, and I'm always in a kind if awe to see that other people feel sad and misunderstood too, it's healthy to share, despite how dark feelings may be. I liked your poem and see no errors. Thanks and enjoy your day.
one of the easiest poetry forms, and always fun to add our own touch to. Well done is capturing the feeling of frost late in fall, while the warm of summer still lingers. Almost like climbing a summit, the higher the colder. My only suggestion is perhaps no "I" it reads more fluid, and doesn't hurt what your trying to express. Thank you for sharing.
A simple small poem that gives a little hope to anyone who has sadness and needs a warm light. This is not over wordy, and expresses the happy feelings that nature can give us, reminds us, and tells there is hope like the sun's rays at the bottom of a forest floor, loving the speckled light. I hope writing this unbranded what saddens.
Well written prose, with a smack in your face impact. It makes me wonder how hard things are for this to be so diametric. Seeing the sun rise and fall and give to the darkness, and wonder if their value in life is powerful imagery, and I'd say there's more than a few people that feel the same. Things can be hard more so for some than others, but that doesn't make us worse, only brighter in our fighting for happiness and to be loved.
Thank you for sharing I enjoyed it despite is sad feeling.
So true if we love someone we do carry a picture, and tell everyone about them, so your faith shouldn't be any different. Anything that bring you peace cannot be all bad, but that being said, I can relate to living my kids, but not the other. This is well written, and kind of moving. I have no suggestions, and like to thank you for sharing and caring.
A poem based on a prompt, highlighted. Enlightens a powerful way to look at things. There's a lot about perception now and indeed it comes down to that, but it's not that easy to quill the fire. Thanks for sharing and the thinking I did. Well written.
Interesting. Perception is really the difference in almost everything, how we see ourselves and interreact with others, opinion and biased beliefs drive us too. My glass in either half full or half empty. You put forth some heavy subject, and it deserves a few reads to get the point across. I see no errors expect for spelling in the description. Thank you for sharing your perception. staiNed
Ohhh! A conversation about Covid. Times have changed in the last three years, and in more ways than I think most realize. I or my kids have never had it and are vaccinated. I work in a grocery store, so didn't have the experiences of closure. I do realize how little people wash their hands, and how much they touch and don't wash. See someone with a tissue, wiping and putting it back in pocket and touching everything. It a sad experience we are all still living. Thank you for sharing, I can relate. staiNed
A powerful tribute poem for those who fight our wars, and those that still do today in such turmoil we live. A very sad vibe to it, and I imagine it stirs up many uncomfortable emotions to those who have experienced war, whether directly or indirectly. Creative and honest. Thank you for sharing and keeping the rating low so everyone can enjoy and perhaps heal a little. Enjoy you day.
Writer's Cramp really brings the best out of us at times, and you used to prompt highlighted well, putting your own somewhat faithful outlook on it. The thoughts of a second chance, perhaps a change in events, learning from mistakes and decisions that were too late realized mistakes.Thank you for sharing I enjoyed the simple feel this gave me, and can't see any errors.
Thanks staiNed
I do not share your views, but that being said can get aboard with the subject of this poem, the weather changes, the impact we are making, end times in a way indeed. I don't have any suggestions to improve on this, honestly told, and simple in its imagery. We're doomed,. Oh my!
Thank you for sharing, we need to be more aware and this enlightens indeed. staiNed
One of the most heartwarming poem themes love and relationship. Everyone experiences this different and it was nice to envision yours with your romantic poem. Rhyme is spot on, though because if it this poem lacks imagery that can help the reader feel as the writer intended. Just my thoughts. I enjoyed your poem, it was a warm feeling so early in my day, Thanks!! Romance is still a thing.
Memory of school, why you behaves as you did, how you thought things were, what you realized everything was like. A lot is said, I'm not sure if fiction or non fiction. School, friends, life was different when I was young as it is for everyone I think. Perhaps breaking into paragraphs and capitalization on title and in dialogue. Just my thoughts. Thank you for sharing.
I'll be honest I'm not sure if I understand this. Being alone from social interactions can be brilliant like a diamond. The prompt words are used great and though small there is some thinking elements to it. Thank you for sharing.
I believe we all have memories that are so special to us, a time when we were so innocent and happy. Your grandpas was your treasure, you share it perfectly. I got a mushy feeling remembering some of my own experiences with my only grandparents. An old house, a taxidermy owl and a piano, and a fancy pee pot in the corner of the bedroom.
Thank you so much for sharing and creating ways for all of us to treasure our mist special memories.
Small straight to the point impactful poem. The happiness of a family, somehow lost and a new person emerges, a second chance. A lot could be said to give some imagery to this but it is understandable as it is.
sacrificed? elaborate? Nice poem. I enjoyed it. Thanks!
Neat idea, addressing your past self, and having that conversation with each times of one person. Ig only this was actually possible, so much I would tell my past self. Well written, a little unemotional. Description could be more engaging.
Thanks!
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