*sits here, on my laptop, staring into nothingness, wondering what i just read and why it was so good* i though there would be more, but those few sentences made me want more and made me wonder how poor jaini would find his flock again. it made me almost sad and scared for him, will he be alright? it was beautiful and, even though short, i love how it ended.
this story was so good, even with this missing commas and alike, it was still so mysterious and question asking. who is tony? what does he and his family have to do with the flashing lights and the furry, wolf-like creature? i was asking so many questions, was he going to be able to get back home, in 2017? would he see shirley again? i love it!
i feel like i kind of connected to this poem, the whole entire thing about people either not liking them (you) together, or just not like them in general. it was really sweet, just enough sweet to make me smile.
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