Okay, it was just that.. okay. It lacked depth and originality. If someone wrote this for me and said it's my way of showing you how much I love you, I'd be appalled.
This read's like a diary entry from a 15 year old. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for? If so, good job! If not, then I'm sorry if I came off insulting just now.
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