If I'm honest I got all the way to the end before I really understood anything that was going on. A second re-read though and the visual imagery and sensory data that comes across is vivid, clearer and easier to digest, where it becomes quite clever. The seemingly chaotic piece quickly gains form and direction, flowing in what becomes a full circle.
An interesting and imaginative read.
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