I loooooveeed it. have you ever found yourself wishing that some fairy tales were true or that Vampires and Werewolves really existed? I guess that if you really believe in something it could come true, even fairy tales. I loved the faye in the story and how you explained that they were beautiful and about there queen can't wait to read the next chapter.
*~*DarkAngel</3
that is a really good story. It could use a little more description but other than that i was good. I found that you could have added to the story. You could have made it into a longer story and the winged boy and the princess could of had more adventures. Although i did like that the winged boy married the princess and eventually became king
*~*DarkAngel</3
I did like it it shows promise and love and hope. But i do have one question was the main person a guy or girl? it kind of confused me when i got to the kissing part because at first i thought it was a girl. Then i thought it was a guy. Now i have no idea. Will you please clear this up for me. other than that it was very good. so i gave it a 4 out of 5. kisses from a Dark Little Angel.
That was a great story. I loved it. Usually i do not think that if you repeat at the begining it will make a good story but in your case it added to the story. i showed how alike and different the to characters were. It also shows how a guardian angel will stay with you always. Thanks for writing this. Kisses from a Dark Little Angel.
That is an amazing story. it shows promise and love and just pure joy. When Angela lives as well as Isabella it shows the things that god can do and the miracles that can happen if you just pray. It is honest and it encourages love and hope and belief in god. it is amazing i loved it.
It is really really good and really really long lol i wish some of my stuff was like this. i loved it and most of my stuff is pretty depressing but all of my friends like it and i have no idea if my stuff is any good. you should check out some of my stuff and let me no thanks. your a great writer
it was pretty great but i think it needs a little bit of work. I am only a beginner in poetry myself but i have tried my best to figure out and put my heart and soul into my writing. check out some of my work sometimes. Thanks i Loved it and i wish you the very best in your writing career. ;) :)
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