This is an excellent poem! I loved the emotions the flowed through this piece of work, clearly this solider is doomed and its sad that we know this. And it also gives us some history lessons in it too, without it seeming at all educational. Good job! I hope you continue writing more for all of us to read.
It is absolutly lovely!! You've painted a picture right in my head and it's wonderful, like reading old fairy tale books. :) I love how you've rhymed it all and it's made sense, it's hard to believe anyone could come up with so many words! But it's clear you have and what a great job you've done!
I loved reading this! It was so discriptive and interesting with the flow of words and dialect. I'd love to read more, it's absolutly magical and especially my type of story! I love the supernatural and sci-fi genres, and this story gets me thinking about the possibilities are of waht might be out there in our world! A good book always leaves the reader interested, and you sure have me interested!
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