\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/spandexwarrior
Review Requests: OFF
1 Public Reviews Given
1 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of More  Open in new Window.
Review by SpandexWarrior Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The first three lines of the first quatrain are a good introduction; I think that you can improve the last line, as it states the obvious and is idiomatic. The metaphor of life to a game is good, but a bit redundant. The resolution is the best part.
1 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/spandexwarrior