I really liked this piece, my favourite feeling during this reading was that past present and future entwined with one another and filled the aura of their good-bye. There is a word missing in the last sentence but a beautiful piece. Some parts were a bit overexplained but I think it added to the longing of them not wanting to say bye.
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