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Review of "Crystal Tear"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! I like this poem. Very emotional and sad. Flowed so well and made me want to read it again.

Thank you for sharing.
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Review of A friend of mine.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I have to say I couldn't get into it at the start, with some slight spelling mistakes and grammar errors spotted, but once I got past the start the dialogue flowed pretty well. Good description at the start but could be shortened to become more effective I think. I didn't like the use of onomatopoeia at the start either. It did leave me wanting to find out more and read the next instalment.

Overall I liked it.

Again I am not an expert and haven't reviewed before, or written much myself.

I hope I have been helpful.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I am not an expert in such matters but found it a nice insight into religious beliefs, and also very informative. Nice to see similarities between different religions and the names of the prophets.


Look forward to reading more.
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