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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I was attracted to the story by two things: the issue of what normal education do to men, and the character that chalenged his fate. I liked it. there are some uncommon words, I wish you could replace them with more suitable words. Also I think there is too much intervening by the speaker, which has made me a little distracted. I wish you the best with your ideas and stories.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
It is a good story that relates to perception. But I stumbled at its beginning with long sentences. I hope to read more and better of this kind.
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