This story was very sweet, and it made me smile. I could picture the little girl's reaction to the 'blood covered' ice cream and laughed when the main character laughed too. It was nice and short, but still very desciptive. I think you had a very good balance of humorous and descriptive writing. Thank you for this story!
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