wow, not sure what to say and that is a god thing...I do like your writing style....a lot said without using a lot of words, that is not na easy task, I've done it..good job...
I almost did not read this, but I am glad that I did. As i was reading I began thinking that you must have had gone thru the death of a family member, I have and you brought the emotion and the feelings that a person goes thru.
I feel that it was well written and you did a great job. I would have like to have read more about why Julio took his wife's life, but then maybe this story was more about the family and their feeling..
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