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Review of poem  Open in new Window.
Review by broken-angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
i love the imagery and i find myself relating to this poem, the rhyming is a smidge off bits here and there dont seem to flow naturally but other than that it was awesome keep writeing (:
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Review by broken-angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
its a good read your right about the rhyming the problem is that it seems to forced almost as if you putt any words just so it would rhyme i sometimes do that when i cant find a word thats the best rhyming option
i love the imagary i can just picture it in my head it has meaning it tells this story thay seems different in everyones mind all you need to fix is the rhyming

keep writeing (:
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Review of Innocent  Open in new Window.
Review by broken-angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
really great poem, its so cute, and your use of high vocabulary makes the visual image come to life, i just wish it was longer, its like it was so good then Bam it was finished
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Review of poem: soulmate  Open in new Window.
Review by broken-angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
the words are really nice, the meaning is so beautiful, theres no reason to think uou should edit it its really good, i love who she knows she is meant to be with him, even though she hasnt met him yet very cool :)
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Review of Radio Blues  Open in new Window.
Review by broken-angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
thats really good, and so true love how it rhymes and how the words just fit with eachother, the only tiny thing i can say negativly is it could of been longer, it was really good i didn't want it to end =D keep writing
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