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60 Public Reviews Given
62 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'm honest when I review thing I'll say what's on my mind but at the same time I try to stay positive and will always tell you what you did right but this means in no way am I a professional reviewer so take my reviews with a grin of salt please
I'm good at...
looking at everything in a positive light even when telling you what's wrong I'll always tell you how to improve ranther then just telling you what's wrong I'm also ranther good at looking at storyline and seeing whether or not the story makes sense
Favorite Genres
My favorite genres are horror, psychological thrillers, mysteries and fantasy
Least Favorite Genres
My least favorite are romance and overly sexual or overly done gory feasts
Favorite Item Types
Novels, short stories and poems
Least Favorite Item Types
None
I will not review...
I will not review anything that uses sex/rape, harm against minors and animals as simple shock factors if you are going to include such topics please do them well and treat them with respect
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Review of Slumber  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful poem about insomnia and the struggles of it. As someone who suffers through the same problem I can relate to wanting to slumber like everyone else can.

The flow and pacing of the poem is perfect and there aren't any grammar mistakes that I can see.

Good job on expressing such a common torture subtly


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This a well written and funny story of your failures of becoming a cowgirl. As a fellow horse lover/cowgirl I understand the thrill and excitement of the wind blowing through your hair and the feeling of freedom that comes with it. Sadly I also understand the sadness of falling off the horse far too well.

The story was humorous and rather engaging and by the time it was over I wanted to read more.

There were no grammar mistakes, as far as I can see anyway, and it was paced perfectly.

My only wish was that there was more but in this case less is more.

Great good Ruwthy


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Review of Muse Got Lost  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem is relatable and cute good job Bon Bon


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Review of Trust Your Gut  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A cute yet scary story
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A beautiful poem that escapes words and has a really good rhythm to it
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A humerus short story that was well written and well work a read


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Review of Lost Within  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
an overall nice poem
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Review of Torment  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was a confusing yet horrific tale of what can only be described as a girl going completely insane.

I adore the fact that you use so few different words they're mostly the same word repeated over and over again yet you feel so many different emotions.

Overall a disturbing piece which I would recommend reading in a dark room at 3am for max spok factor->slime-j


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I must say geoffrey you did an extremely good job at immediately immersing the reader nearly instantly and unlike many other stories you did not use overly technical language when describing any scientific point of the story.

your description of the island so far is very accurate when it comes to island that are outside of normal modern civilization and introducing a translator early in the story in a unique way and not a overly convenient way so as to immerse the reader farther.

So far i have only told you what i enjoyed about this however there is one thing i can think of to immediately improve the story and that is just giving us a better description of the Professor as you mention a bread but we were never told he had a clean and well looked after bread at all.

overall it is a beautifully worded all round nearly perfect story and i would love to see more work done on the same level as this->slime-j


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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
It's a good start to a story expect I noticed you placed a lot of full stops a the beginning and while I'm no expert that amount of full stops aren't normally required but other then that I enjoyed it and like your style of writing


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Review of Enduring Flame  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A beautiful poem with pleasant language and a nice, warm feeling after reading it


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Review of Monster  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
A great poem all around
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Review of Her First Time  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
A common experience that everyone hates having done and also beautifully diverted expectations from a much darker ending that only a dark minded reader will begin to expect


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Rated: E | (5.0)
A Poem that seems to be about breast cancer which if it is about breast cancer then it is done beautifully subtly


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Review of A Heroes Dream  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
An amusing thought


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Rated: E | (3.5)
So true


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Review of Pizza  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem expresses one of the most basic universal laws of the universe even the mutiverse and that law is pizza is the best food ever


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Review of Motivation  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This would make a great battle speech


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A poem that could be taken as a happy story or as a sad story deepening on your point of view on the world


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Rated: E | (3.0)
Great inspiration and a good quick lesson good job


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a very true and enjoyable poem seemingly about a men's dying sex life a place everyone finds themselves in at a least one point in their life.

I would how ever would like to see a longer version of this poem.

How ever personally I think the ending is a bit weak so I recommend that you either try ending with a bigger statement or make the poem longer though this is just my personal opinion.


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Review of GEOMETRIC  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
This poem is an example of a every day amusing occurrence in any given school keep it up mate


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Review of No Longer Alone  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The letter was done flawlessly and the narrative was well done as well pretty impressive story
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This has made me luagh for sure
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Howdy I've just finished writing and proof reading my first horror novel called the thing in the shadows: prologue
If you don't mind could you guys check it out give it a review and give me some feedback if you have any
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