So emotional and deeply felt, this one. One has to move on with their life when their genuine actions are never returned from supposed loved ones. You sounded so real and true. Like it was a personal experience, though most of us find such in our daily lives.
Really enjoyed your short story. Liked how it transitioned from normal to horror. I felt Heather's fear of being in a dark office hall searching for a file. Thanks, really enjoyed myself.
A great piece, and I enjoyed it to the later. But you should try putting it in versed form, for it will make a great work of poetry if rendered thus. I enjoyed the last part where you asked that unanswered question for centuries. Thank you and keep it up.
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