I thought that this story was very intriguing. The message was well conveyed, to me at least. The darkness made it enjoyable and the idea followed along great. I thought this was very well written and the journal entries made it interesting. Good Job on this.
I really liked this story, It was simple and concise the way a good short story should be. Easy to read and flowed well. Some of the dialog was a little weak, but easy to overcome. The settings were well described and the action was believable. I want to read more of what you have written, very good job. Enjoyed it.
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