Wow! That was an incredible read! When I read something it has to grab my interest in the first few pages or I can't get into it. I was there with the first few sentences with your story. It was easy flowing and interesting. The use of a clown as the main villain was a great idea since many people already have a fear of them. I could not stop reading until I reached the end, the suspense growing with every word. I could picture the events in my mind and saw each scene clearly and that is what a good story is all about. Being able to take the reader to a distant place of make believe to only leave them wanting more. Excellent!
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