I read your Monotetra contest entry for I Write in 2025.
I love reading the poetry contest entries because I love trying new forms. This was a new one for me and I really enjoyed reading yours! Poems are short so reviews seem so difficult but...
I love that there are no spelling mistakes. Where I live right now it is below zero so your poem very quickly evoked physical recognition. My favorite line is "Stay in, sneezy. Stay in, sneezy". But I also really like "something freezy"
I don't have anything negative to say about your poem but I do think that technically line seven has nine syllables.
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Where I live right now it is below zero so your poem very quickly evoked physical recognition. My favorite line is "Stay in, sneezy. Stay in, sneezy". But I also really like "something freezy" 
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