I was wondering what you could have written on this topic of bipolar disorder. But, this writing amazed me! You showed the extreme points of human nature through colors. I think the colors are correct to their significances. The title is apt! It couldn't have been simpler than how you have done it. Great work.
I liked this piece. It's short and simple yet meaningful. I think, this is not just only through a bowler's perspective but through one and all who thrown his/her hands in despair after a few unsuccessful tries. But I actually didn't get what the last line "Take one, on the chin..." exactly mean. Above all, it's a nice one.
This is so goddamned funny ! How can the heart be musical ? LOL .
Kissing the heart ! Haha ! Garden of hands, oh God, so many.
Marrying in a mall, publicity, so interesting
Four children, over-population with just three names !
Being the water of someone forever sounds stupid .
Anyways, this is a funny madlib and I loved it. Hope my better half loves it as well !
Such a poignant piece .
It just left me teary-eyed, seriously.
Every word in every line evokes so much of emotional imagery.
An amazingly impressive oeuvre, needless to say, though
Seems that your heart is weighed down with pangs of sorrow and rejection.
Cheer up [ even it's a Herculean job, something near to impossible or almost, I suppose ]
I loved the way you expressed, worth praise.
Keep it up.
Moved by this . Very emotion-stirring , indeed . Sadly , this is a part of love .
There is nothing like one cannot understand what you are trying to convey through this poem .
The rhyming of the poem is very much correctly done , with simple yet proper wordings .
Nothing , except a bird , can be compared well to Freedom .
What I truly liked about this poem is that , the comparison has been effectively carried out .
Being more precise , freedom has been portrayed through the life of a bird and its easy to understand
Keep writing .
I love this piece
Nobody in this world is perfect for sure . N I loved the theme and the content as well .
Short and so true
People should be accepted the way they are , nice .
Keep writing , good going
The gentle imbuing of your thoughts like the whirling of the froth in the pool is amazing .
This poem gives a tender feeling , I mean , the feel of softness in each and every line .
Sweetness
This poem stirred my emotions . Great work .
You pulled in the simplicity so well .
The poem seemed to flow down like water in a rivulet . Smooth
Lovely !
This theme is very touching . Coz Mom is the word ! :)
All that you have nicely conveyed through this piece has every bit of truism in it :)
And in the last stanza , I loved the line : Independent , ... mother gives . :)
Great !
I must say , this writing is just so awe-inspiring :)
It literally strikes a strong chord (very strong enough , indeed) with my opinions on the extremities of love .
You have beautifully penned down your words into lines ,
and this perfect dropping of lines in a proper way gives it a substantial sense :)
The warmth of love is so precisely jotted down :)
Keep writing ! :D
Aah , this piece of writing focuses strongly on 'Onomatopoeia' - the literary device for sounds . Just wanted to know , what does the title suggest upon ? It wasn't quite clear , though . But still , the jingling of sounds caught my attention . Like this . Keep writing . Do see my poems . ! :) Happy happy ahead !
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How can the heart be musical ? LOL .
