I like how you give a description of God and then your visual of it. The separate "thoughts" of the paragraphs in the second part flow nicely. The idea that we will all become one again hadn't really occurred to me before. I like that thought. I'm interested in more of where you went with this.
The topic of this question is interesting. I hadn't thought if that was possibility before. I appreciate people who make me think about where I am and what I believe. I also like questions that stretch my view on the world.
I enjoy the journey taken in this poem. I didn't expect that from a poem. I enjoyed that. I didn't understand the line "When you hated love to need?" I think I could figure out some meaning to it, but it was a little confusing. I'm sure that it was chosen because of the format. Well done.
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