This poem is confusing, I don't understand what is going on. What is your main idea in this? Why Are the first two lines repeated ? This Poem is kind of empty doesn't really have a solid back ground meaning.
This Poem is great I love it, and i totally understand where you are coming from if this is a real life poem. i understand how you are talking about heart break. But i also feel like you could have worded it better. Some of it To me made no sense to me. i felt as if you could have used better word choice in the poem.
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