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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
First of all, I think what you are doing is super cool. Starting a novel is an amazing amazing accomplishment. I like the writing style where it feels personal and close to home and a little bit all over the place dictating the narrator's state of mind. I would live if it had a little more direction and a little more narration in the story itself but loving this! Keep it up and I hope to see you published one day!


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