I like the way how you creatively added a life lesson into your story. It has such a simple ending, making it even more satisfying to read. I can tell that the story was well brainstormed ahead of time. Good Job
Amazing! This is so true. My favorite part was the second stanza especially the question at the end, "Do they really matter to you?" Your poem is rich in vocabulary. Keep publishing. ;)
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