This is quite a surprise, and yet still able to hold the climax though i thought it is. the story line gets more complex and more exciting making me wanting more. The injection of comedy in the words used make the story alive after a river of romances and serious plots. It still has the twist of sweet love and the sour of past in it but still keeps you wanting for more as the excitement stops half way to remind you that the story is yet to end. wonderful!
That was so creative, as i was expecting a surprise it was! The whole plot has won, the way it is planned and organized is connected to every part of the story, so friendly that it cannot let me stop reading and contrary to what i used to do, which is to scroll down to the bottom just to find a better sultry part. This is great every chapter, complex yet brief.
The thrill just keep going aren't they? Seriously I thought i can predict this as i normally does for my reviews but when I reached this part, it was so sweet, romantic and the dinner part was so exciting though the path towards the dinner was quite brief I am still satisfied that the end was not a part of my predictions at all, very fascinating!
I didnt manage to put on a review but only rated this for 4.5 in the prev chapters, but my instincts told me that I should keep reading this has got to give me a surprise. For me it was very modern but a splash of creative classic somewhere, and it just reminded me of the eagerness to watch One Tree Hill. I'll keep going for sure!
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