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Review of OI! DRAGON!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Interesting. I think you should flesh it out more and turn it into a children's book.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Can't wait for the next installment!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Ok. Found it, lol...

Oh, plot twist...I thought the protagonist was single.

I'm gonna keep going...
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Review of illicit affair  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting. Is there more on this site? I want to rate this, but I would like to read a little more.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I want more!

I couldn't help but laugh at Kora struggling to be in charge. Haven't we all been frustrated to that point?

I hope you post more because I want to see what else happens :)

I like how the dialogue moves you along through the action. I got to the end and said to myself, "What?!? Where's the rest?"
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