I enjoyed the concept of the story. I'm pretty partial to college-aged scenarios, so one about a party sounded pretty cool to me. And the fact that the person who shrinks is the host of the party makes things even more interesting.
And seeing that this is a fairly new story as well made it even better, because it's always nice to see new stories gain traction here.
One of the things I liked the most about this story was the variety of characters. Even though they are all 'nerdy', they were all into different kinds of things which helped differentiate them.
And I'm always appreciative of stories with characters who are out of high school, and into the college range.
And the way you set up the shrinking process allows for more possibilities and choices on where the story goes.
I really like the concept for this story. There can never be too many college based (or anything that's post high school) interactive.
I also liked how there was some diversity in the your cast of characters. Although I wish there were more opportunities for unaware interactions with the characters that you started with. All of their intro chapters have the character shrink the protagonist. Although people can still write in unaware scenarios as the story progresses, so it's a very minor gripe.
And it's always heartening to see the original author work so hard on adding chapters, far after their originally started the story. Too many authors just make stories and hope that the population adds to them. So good on you!
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