I loved this! Your rhymes flow really nicely, and it's slightly humorous... at least I think so. It might just be me. A couple of my favorite lines were "broken demented" and "unlucky in love." Very well done! =)
I really loved this poem, and could totally sympathize with whoever the narrator is. Everyone wants to be able to share their deepest, darkest secrets with someone. More specifically, someone that might even love them. Your words flowed together really well, and this was easy to read, which made it all the more enjoyable. Kudos on a great poem! =)
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