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Review of Escaped (The Beginning)

Review by cj

Rated: E

| (4.5)

wow! very well done. nice action , tension, emotions, descriptions, dialog, everything.

I love how the descriptions are almost in the characters thoughts instead of just being stated.

This almost sounds like the girl's diary writings about what's happening.

Mine's still a bit choppy. :(

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