Hi there!
Great poem. I was laughing the whole way through, as I'm sure you were when you wrote it. That really comes through in the inventive yet relatable tales about struggling with emails. (I too have hundreds of unread in my inbox). I liked the phonology and the ease with which the words flowed from one line to the next.
Really I can't fault this masterful poem. Well done!
great story!
I'm still new to writing reviews, so don't take anything I say too seriously.
I really liked the story and how the whole thing spiralled into the title so everything went neatly together. Sorry, I'm not being very succinct about this. I just liked it, and that's the main thing. I can't tell you how to get any better as I don't usually write this type of genre, I'm a bit more comedy for kids character.
I did notice one little thing- "I tired to force a grin but couldn't."- Did you mean 'I tried to force a grin' or not? Just saying, other than that, it was amazing.
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