Definitely a interesting piece of work you have here, i was impressed with your word choice,and the way you arranged everything together, but still, you should try and expand your vocabulary even more! Nothing better than using fancy words when they are used properly,and you do that, you might just rise to the top as the creme de la creme of poetry. just keep going at it, i can see that you have potential!^^ Keep going Strong!
Hello all! I'm a newbie here, I like video games, anime, and I'm a computer freak,I like, horror,action,romance,fantasy,mystery, and pretty much any other genre you can think of! I found this site while searching for writing contests, I've started some stories on another site, but this site seems so much better. So i think ill transfer it all over here!, so come and check out my work once i get it on here! ^_^
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