There were a few grammer issues but I was impressed with your deep thought process. Obviously you put a lot of thought into it. It's a little dark for my taste but still a good piece.
Not bad but wasn't really feeling it. Even if you only write a few paragraphs, I want to read something in it that will draw me in. Be more descriptive. Keep writing.
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