The first thing I thought of was Bradley Whitfield driving a golf cart through a subterranean concrete hellscape in Cabin in the Woods. Then I switched instantly to my partner, who works in corporate IT, and how entirely on-brand this is for his attitude to employment (on the protagonist's side—he's always b*tching about the phone-it-in employees).
I especially love the drip feed of detail and the reward of re-reading, going back through each section once I had the reveal so I could pick up more information. I'm assuming this is Lucifer's business and we don't have Dave to blame for that one. Corrupting Saint Augustine would be one hell of a catch, though. And how stiff is the competition from Heaven? These are all things I want to know and the joy is in the imagining.
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