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Review by seri-lyn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this one it looks like a business card for an Irish business, or for a rennassiance faire thing. Also I like this because it has my favorite color green in it.
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Review by seri-lyn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is ok, it might look better if the house fades in and out of sight instead of flashing on and off, its just that flashing annoys some people, but if you like it thats all that matters.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was very beautiful, out of curosity of what religion are you?
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
this was a good poem, was it for some contest? my favorite quote alone this theme is: "you can love your country, but hate your government."
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Review by seri-lyn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked this poem, I have often felt that random acts of kindness, like smiling at people as you pass by, can make the world a better place.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked this story, I hope Lark gets the peace and healing he needs.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I liked this. are you going to continue this story line?
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked this story, the part at the end about the dragon finding little gold at the bank was a nice twist. I am looking foward to seeing if you continue this story.
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Review by seri-lyn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This scene between an Alien representative and a human highly illustrates how humerous a first contact situation can be. I am able to see both points of view but what makes for true drama is that both main characters cannot overcome their own cultures to connect to each other. This is very good and made me chuckle for a few mintutes. You could make the chapter longer, expand the point of view, but it is fine the way it is.
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